“The girls were the prey of a demographic which local and national authorities would not allow to be seen as predators”
- Why this matters
- The words "prey of a demographic" and "to be seen as predators" make the predators a whole demographic, Pakistani-heritage people, rather than the men who committed the crimes.
- The impression it gives
- A reader comes away believing that people of Pakistani heritage, as a group, are predators whom the authorities protected from scrutiny.
- The context
- The previous sentence ties the abuse to specific towns and to men who were "mostly" of Pakistani heritage. The crimes were committed by particular men, not by a demographic. The column itself argues that individual conduct should not be treated as a defining quality of strangers who share a skin colour, then does exactly that here.
How we know
- Elsewhere in the article“white working-class girls were exploited by mostly Pakistani-heritage men”
- Elsewhere in the article“would not be hyped up in the aggregate as definitional qualities of strangers who happen to share their skin colour”